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  • 聰明的小孩  S1A
  • The thing that distract me from studying. I like to listen to music. Because listen to music can make me relax. But usually make me too late to study. I`m very compunction. Also has a matter. It is I take a shower slowly too. So I hoped that I can do better than now.
  • The thing that disturbs me from studying is that I like to listen to music while studying. Listening to music can help me relax but sometimes takes me lots of time enjoying the pop music. Also, I always spend more time taking a shower. How I wish I can concentrate on my study.
    Dear CHILD:
    You did much better than before. Still, you have to notice your grammar and structure and make your article readable.
    Your Grade is A-

    alina9290035 於 2009/03/11 10:31 回覆

  • 高一孝 6號 林楷齡
  • The thing that distract me from studying. When I studying I like to listen to music.The music can make me distract but sometimes also can make me distract.So I don't listen to music when I studying.That method is can make me concentrate to study.
  • SIB 16 高偉豪
  • The thing that distract me from studying. that will be the computer, food, the refrigerator, and so on…How no matter, I am meets in the home not with single-hearted devotion. Because lets me too comfortably to study. Therefore I must study in the peaceful place, for example library, outside. I have the means to study peacefully. But these are give a pretext. It is actually because I don’t have the means to be peaceful down handle a matter.
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