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  • 打的有點少太是我盡力了 因為作文好難

    My ideal mate, has the devil stature, gentle sound, delicate facial cast, but also has the whole body to send out the charm. Most importantly, I can the sincerity true meaning love she, this is the companion who I must look. The mate must side me, we want every day to go to each place together, but must like with showing loving care.
  • SIB 14 殺恨大堯堯
  • In our life,we all need a partner.However,it's hard to find a good partner.Some choose to get one through Internet'while others choose to blind date'someone else.Whether these are good ways or not,we alllong for am ideal partner.
    For mw, my ideal partner,doesn't have to be rich,but she must be kind,I pictcher my ideal partner a bright and smart person.But the most of all she can make me smile.
    In this world,everyone has his/her standard,in choosing their partner.I thing even their partner isn't prety,but in their eye he or she can be best.
    Now I being a student,I Should pay more attention to my study,and try to make myself a better one in this way I can go well with my ideal partner.